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The story is a fairly good one -
although somewhat implausible,
since supposedly the guy
was some god made human,
with dad and son mixed;
anyway, the tale
makes wild claims
about
grace.
– a pseudo-haiku.
One comment
Bob Gehrenbeck
A surprising theme for you, but an excellent poem, I think! I like the informal, seemingly irreverent style, leading to an unexpected and profound ending.
A surprising theme for you, but an excellent poem, I think! I like the informal, seemingly irreverent style, leading to an unexpected and profound ending.