Clouds
pile up
and they push
against the vague,
hazy horizons.
A wind from the northwest
grasps at the recumbent leaves
so that they panic and protest,
leaving them coldly disconsolate.
– a reverse nonnet
One comment
Bob Gehrenbeck
I don’t feel that I often make insightful comments about your poetry, except to say that I like certain poems a great deal. This is one of them! I love the sounds of the consonants as they “pile up” in the poem.
I don’t feel that I often make insightful comments about your poetry, except to say that I like certain poems a great deal. This is one of them! I love the sounds of the consonants as they “pile up” in the poem.