Caveat: Nonnet #29

(Poem #54 on new numbering scheme)

Time
is not
exactly
a progression
of simple events.
Rather, it loops and whirls,
perhaps like a falling leaf
caught up in a vortex of wind
skittering across our grassy minds.

– a reverse nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #28

(Poem #53 on new numbering scheme)

Korean ghosts are thick on the ground:
everyone's ancestors cluster
round each monument or tree.
There are some migrants, too:
shades that have followed
a sorry soul's
displacements:
Michelle's
ghost.

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #25

(Poem #50 on new numbering scheme)

Automobiles are a kind of theme
that were roaring through my childhood.
My father grew up with cars.
My youngest memories
thrum with the noises
emerging from
my father's
Model
A.

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #24

(Poem #49 on new numbering scheme)

Last night we got a refreshing rain.
so my coworker turned to me
and wanted to know what kind
of idiom we use
to express that breath
of cool pleasure
in English.
"I don't
know."

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #23

(Poem #48 on new numbering scheme)

Some kids have a lot to say in class.
Other students stare wordlessly.
I want them to feel their worth,
understand our topics,
and become engaged.
Mostly I fail.
It is hard.
They just
sit.

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #22

(Poem #47 on new numbering scheme)

Fall
can't come
all at once.
Fall must sneak in,
catch us unawares
with a yellow leaf here
and a northerly breeze there.
I smelled autumn's covert rustlings
today: percepts tasting of woodsmoke.

– a reverse nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #21

(Poem #46 on new numbering scheme)

That ineffable cobalt color
was painting the glowering clouds.
Conspiratorially,
the air whispered its plans
for inundation.
Then I felt it
on my cheek:
one cool
drop.

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #19 “Sum”

(Poem #44 on new numbering scheme)

Some days feel like things are going well.
Some days start well but end badly.
Some days I dread but end great.
Some days are smooth like glass.
Some days are bumpy.
Some days give joy.
Some days don't.
Some days
suck.

– a nonnet
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Caveat: Nonnet #14 “Lo que cantó la cigarra”

(Poem #39 on new numbering scheme)

Ví que amaneció nublado
pero ya al mediodía
se había convertido
en día de calor.
Una cigarra
allá arriba
me cantó,
"Hola,
pues."

– un noneto
[Update: My friend Bob suggested I translate this into English, but retaining the nonnet form. I took the challenge:]

I saw that the morning dawned cloudy
but by the middle of the day
the weather had changed so it
had become a hot day.
Then a cicada
somewhere up there
sang to me
"Hello,
there."

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #7 “Azar”

I’ve decided to take on the challenge I suggested to myself (with encouragement from my friend Bob) a few posts back: I will make a nonnet every day. The last few days I’ve tested, to see if it’s doable, and I have done it. So I have a little stockpile, now, of half-a-dozen nonnets. And I will move forward, and try to make a nonnet every day, and post it. I guess a side-effect of this is that I’m am, tentatively, returning to my old two-posts-a-day pattern, which I abandoned around the time of my cancer diagnosis, 3 years ago.

Counting backwards among the ones posted previously, starting with one last year, I think this would be number 7.

(Poem #32 on new numbering scheme)

Living is what we do till we die.
We take on difficult questions,
or we simply live each day.
We love that children play.
We can watch the rain.
We can see trees.
Then it ends.
It's just
luck.

– a nonnet
picture

Caveat: Nonnet #6 “up in the trees”

Now I have made an “inverted” nonnet. I have no idea if this is a thing that’s been done before. It’s the same as a nonnet, just the other way around. Below, I drew the “blue cicada in a bottle” and originally posted it some years ago.
(Poem #31 on new numbering scheme)

Blue
singing
cicadas
up in the trees
have explained to me
without using language
that summer is not so bad,
that it passes in a moment,
that the green, breeze-blown leaves caress them.

– a reverse nonnet

Blue_cicada

picture[daily log: walking, 7km]

Caveat: Nonnet #5 “This House Opposes Summer”

One reason I like nonnets is that it’s possible to compose them entirely in my head. They are sufficiently compact and structured that I can hold the whole thing in my “working memory” as I work out each line. Thus, I can do it while walking, which is another pastime of mine that doesn’t always mix well with writing, since this latter usually requires having a keyboard or notepad in front of me.
I made this nonnet walking to work.

(Poem #30 on new numbering scheme)

I hate summer, because it's too hot.
The sun squashes me, like an ant.
The air seems thick, like asphalt.
I start missing winter.
I could stride quickly.
I could shiver.
"Ah! So cold,
like a
ghost."

– a nonnet.

It’s occurred to me I could write a nonnet every day, while walking to work. Am I so ambitious?

picture[daily log: walking, 6.5km]

Caveat: Nonnet #4 “beans”

I wrote another nonnet. My friend Bob commented that I seem to have a “knack” for them. I don’t know about that, but I enjoy doing them – they are constrained like haiku, and the constraints are syllabic rather than metric (a type of constraint I find more difficult to “do in my head”). The haiku form, nowadays, has a bit of a cliche feel in English, which these nonnets avoid.
(Poem #29 on new numbering scheme)

Consciousness
Speculating about my own mind:
moments of consciousness might be
like little fragments of light;
but no, that's wrong. Instead,
like so many beans,
we toss them up;
they begin
to fall
down.

– a nonnet
picture[daily log: walking, 7km]

Caveat: four seasons?

A nonnet I made.
(Poem #28 on new numbering scheme)

Fifth Season
they say Korea has four seasons.
I think actually there are five:
in mid-summer, the sky hides;
and the pouring rain comes;
so I dodge rivers;
and more rain comes;
and humid,
sultry
air.

– a nonnet
picture[daily log: walking, 2km]

Caveat: lifelong

This poem is a bit more “trite” than what I normally write. I think adding the rhyming constraint to the regular nonnet form overkills it. Anyway, it’s kind of a “throw away” effort, but in the absence of anything more interesting to post…
(Poem #27 on new numbering scheme)

Walking
footsteps striding along like a song
one hears in one's own mind, for long
seconds, only to prolong
themselves among a throng,
each wants to belong
plunging headlong
never wrong,
lifelong,
strong.

– a nonnet
picture[daily log: walking, 6.5km]

Caveat: july’s weather

This poem is a nonnet that I made while walking.
(Poem #20 on new numbering scheme)

july's weather
first the streets were wet with rain and trees
were swinging, wind was taking fierce
liberties with scudding clouds
and broken umbrellas
but then the rain stopped
humid air calmed
cicadas
crafted
songs

– a nonnet
picture[daily log: walking, 6 km]

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