Caveat: Poem #2274 “And then I woke up”

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confused tableaux  disjointed narratives  surreal settings
strange dreams

unlikely transitions  random characters  old memories
strange dreams

korean prison  alaskan school  mexican church
strange dreams

it's happened
there appeared
made abstract
giraffe came
said some things
captured me
turned yellow

past events  present anxieties  future hopes
strange dreams

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #2037 “Violent hopes”

ХАЙ ЖИВЕ, ВІЛЬНА УКРАЇНА!
historical hopes  proud hopes  possible hopes
revanchist expectations
diplomatic action  logistical action  military action
geopolitical advancement
necessary war  justified war  holy war
pointless invasion
send them in
let them fight
take the land
burn houses
get captured
shoot it all
go to hell
righteous violence  mud-strewn violence  bitter violence
violent hopes

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #1671 “The elder gods”

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antisocial potholes  vagrant potholes  migratory potholes
geologic potholes
random potholes  unexpected potholes  cowardly potholes
illusory potholes
amoebic potholes  epistemic potholes  inchoate potholes
abyssal potholes
the car's tires
roll and dodge
across, up,
through, around,
among,
between...
and fail
lurking potholes  somnolent potholes  narcotic potholes
welcoming potholes

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #1603 “A diagram of a tree”

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spinning leaves  yellow leaves  vibrant leaves
green leaves
wind-blown branches  wandering branches  smooth branches
attenuated branches
forking branches  lazy branches  rough branches
strong branches
the tree's trunk
raises
the tree's leaves
journeys
from earth
to sky
inevitably
twisted roots  spiraling roots  vagrant roots
still roots

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #1412 “A diagram of my garden”


small carrots    growing radishes    expansionist lettuce
bold vegetables

black soil    damp sand    mildewy stones
fertile earth

buzzing bees    hovering gnats    stealthy mosquitoes
industrious worms

the greenhouse
shelters
the young plants
and provides
a space
to grow
and flourish

still air    hanging sun    passing clouds
coming rain

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #1383 “The cartographer’s creation”


fictional settings   urban landscapes   distant mountains
alternate places

ghostly buildings   impossible canyons   angelic bridges
immaterial places

misplaced forests   migratory cities   shifting oceans
errant places

The places I draw
that I imagine
take shape
coalesce
make little movements
and progress
and become

curving lines   baroque grids   linear arabesques
imagined maps

– a quennet.
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Caveat: Poem #1140 “The philosopher in the wilderness”

worried thoughts   bold plans   internal doubts
early dusk

optimistic words   verbal hesitations   pertinent questions
black caterpillars

long pauses   happy suggestions   convoluted rationalizations
aimless slugs

they might
hope
to change
minds
and nevertheless
we remain
obdurate

looming fog   still forest   patient spider
irresolute conversation

– a quennet
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Caveat: Poem #1055 “A diagram of a journey to my room in the attic”

northbound stairs   dawn sun   sacrificial soul
wide wings

righthand turning   brilliant daylight   reflective meditations
cupric sea

downward view   peremptory cloud   empty thoughts
still trees

the gaze
encompasses
the world but
fails
to understand
anything
at all

slumped posture   plain wall   cluttered mind
simple window

– a quennet
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Caveat: Poem #1030 “Syntactic verse”

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strident birds  green ideas  forceful sunlight
gloomy eagle
grave concerns  red movement  gentle wind
rough bark
angular branches  precipitous descent  able creatures
spinning insects
the day
arrives
but nothing
changes
except now
it all feels
different
deep soil  dull failure  dead spirits
ghostly contortions

– a quennet. This poetic form, called a quennet, is one of the many odd and wonderful things to emerge from Oulipo. It is a specification not based on meter or rhyme but rather parts of speech and word counts – you could argue that it is syntactic versification. I think more could be done with inventing such constraints.
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